Post by Marlin on Jul 5, 2009 18:01:33 GMT -5
"She. Never. Shut. Up. It was more than just a little annoying. Let's just say it instilled the strong desire in him to bash his head against the nearest rock repeatedly. It made him want to cram a wad of seaweed or some other nearby debris into her mouth if only to silence her for a moment. It made him think other uncharacteristically violent solutions to curb his growing intolerance of her nonsense..."
Enjoy.
I really like how this one came out. As one reviewer aptly stated, the middle rambles a bit, but I felt I got it together towards the end.
As I've said many times, I love Dory and Marlin's relationship in the film, so I felt the urge to write about it. Problem is, I'm very good at writing these two so I got comfortable with writing them...at the expense of writing for other characters! I have a hard time inspiring myself to write stories about characters OTHER than them...I have a few in progress, but they're coming along rather slowly...
Enjoy.
I really like how this one came out. As one reviewer aptly stated, the middle rambles a bit, but I felt I got it together towards the end.
As I've said many times, I love Dory and Marlin's relationship in the film, so I felt the urge to write about it. Problem is, I'm very good at writing these two so I got comfortable with writing them...at the expense of writing for other characters! I have a hard time inspiring myself to write stories about characters OTHER than them...I have a few in progress, but they're coming along rather slowly...
